I'll check your reviews later, but the first thing I'd ask is what's your educational background?
Now, I'm not saying you gotta get a journalism degree, but you'd be amazed at what you can learn in a Composition 101 course. Even from a community college. They'll give you the raw basics, like what is acceptable and what is not (they'll go on and on about slang terms, colloquialisms, active vs. passive voice, etc). Just one or two courses will really fine tune your writing.
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